Unsaid

I was inspired to write a poem recently and it felt good. I haven’t written a real poem in many many years, I used to write them all the time.

I hear so much being unsaid
All these mistakes are marked in red
The distance continues to grow
The bitter taste of a foe
All the words put aside
Leaving the thoughts you can’t confide
Truths become harder to find
Silence leaves so much behind

[tags]poem[/tags]

  1. H.

    September 26, 2008 at 9:28 pm

    You should write more. You’re talented.

  2. metalmom

    September 27, 2008 at 1:02 pm

    That can apply to so many situations. I liked it. :rock:

  3. Charlene

    September 27, 2008 at 2:19 pm

    girl this is an awesome poem~~~may i use it on one of my blogs as the beginning of a post

    ~~i will wait until i learn how to link it to you~~i deleted a ton of emails and guess what i deleted

    all of my sheat cheats

    dumbasscrazychar

  4. Robin

    September 27, 2008 at 4:01 pm

    Thanks guys, sometimes I think it’s the stuff you can’t say that works so well in poems.

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